First Thoughts...

I've been thinking about my own draft for Project 3, and I have to tell you (Prof Lay) that I think I want to rewrite most of it.  It's not that it  was horrible, but I think that it's less organized and fluid than I would like.  Usually, I have to rework most of my drafts several times to achieve the kind of writing that I want to put out to the world.  I don't know exactly what else to say, but I think this project was more difficult than I initially expected.  It's hard to find that middle ground where it's not too much description but also it gives the reader a clear and clean image.