I keep thinking about my project 3, and I’m pretty sure my next [rhetorical] move will be to try and find a more smooth and coherent train of thought within my writing. I think I came up with some good points of discussion, but I need to make it more fluid in order to make more sense. Also I'd like to try to find more similes and other forms of words in order to make help with this too.
What is fluid anyway? Is this some metaphor you are working on?
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